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  Your cellphone vibrated in your pocket, and judging from the ringtone it was Japan calling. For every country you gave them their own ringtone; and since Japan, was, well, an otaku, to put it blunt, you had given him a Vocaloid song for his ringtone.

  Digging around your pocket for the small device, you flipped it open and held it to your ear. "Hello? Kiku?"

  "Ah, _____. This is Kiku speaking," Kiku answered politely. "I was wondering if you'd rike to get some snacks with me? Itary-san and Germany-san are out training."

  "Shouldn't you be training with them too?" you asked curiously.

  "No. Germany-san gave me a break," Kiku explained. "So, wirl you come with me?"

  "Yeah, sure." you felt your face heat up a bit. "Um, where do you wanna meet?"

  "There is a pocky store near your house; you know where that is, right?" Kiku asked. "I wirl meet you there in a few minutes, okay?"

  "Okay. See you there," you said.

  "Okay. Bye." the phone clicked, and you felt a blush stain your cheeks.

  You were going to spend time with Kiku, alone! A small squeal escaped your lips, and you let out a dreamy sigh. You've been crushing on the Japanese man since you first met him; he was always calm and collected, but funny at the same time. You remembered the time when you caught him reading erotic content...


  "Hey, Kiku!" you called. "Where'd you go?"

  As you padded down the hallways, a noise was suddenly heard.

  The rustling of pages turning caught your attention, and in your curiosity you slunk towards the sound. Poking your head through the door, you grinned as you saw your Asian best friend and crush reading a book. You weren't able to see the cover; he was facing away from you.

  Slowly and quietly, you tip-toed up behind the Japanese man. Usually, Kiku would've noticed you by now, but he was so enraptured in this book that he didn't.

  Finally, you were close enough to read over his shoulder. The only problem? You couldn't read Japanese, so instead you settled for the pictures.

  What you saw first made you gag, then choke, and finally burst into a hysterical fit of laughter as the startled Kiku stared at you in shock.

  "O-Oh my god!" you managed to get out. "Kiku! Why th-the heck... are you reading what I assume to be M-rated stuff?!"

  Kiku blushed profusely, clearing his throat in embarrassment. "_____... I, uhm, did not see you there..."

  Strangely, this just caused you to laugh harder. Oh, you were so
not gonna let Kiku live this down.

Flashback end

  You snapped out of your reminiscing, remembering that you had to get ready to meet Kiku. Brushing out your hair, you threw on some simple, everyday clothes before walking to the pocky store Kiku had mentioned.

  Ah, pocky. Your favorite Japanese sweet snack food... thing.

  You spotted Kiku standing outside the door, a pocky box already in his hand with a pocky stick hanging out of his mouth.

  "Ah, _____, you're here. I arlready bought some... do you want to share for the time being?" Kiku asked as he noticed your presence.

  "Yeah, sure," you said with a smile. "Wanna go sit?"

  You got a nod from Kiku, and you gestured towards the table near them.

  "So, Kiku, how has your day been going?" you asked as you nibbled on the pocky stick. Kiku seemed to hesitate before responding.

  "It has been going fine. What about you, _____?" Kiku asked.

  "My day has actually been going pretty good. Thanks for asking," you grinned. My day's been going good because of you...


  There was an awkward silence for a while, you contemplating on what to say and Kiku thinking about something. Something that involved you, him, and something Italy had told him.

  "Vee~ Japan, if you want to kiss her, just play that pocky game!

  "_____," Kiku said suddenly. His face was a light shade of pink, and you eyed him curiously, a pocky stick hanging from your mouth.

  "What's up?"

  "Crlose your eyes, prlease," Kiku asked softly.

  "O-Oh... uhm, okay..." you mumbled. A blush spilled across your cheeks as you felt some pressure on the other end of your pocky stick, and you nearly snapped open your eyes if it wasn't for Kiku murmuring," Keep them crlosed untirl I say you can open them. Prlease."

  A small crunch sound signified that Kiku had taken a small bite off the other end of the pocky, and he now waited for you to take a bite.

  Slowly, you did. Taking a delicate bite, your face radiated heat as Kiku's face got closer and closer to yours.

  Right before Kiku took the last bite which would end up with his lips on yours, he murmured something so soft, so barely audible that you just barely caught it.

  "Aishiteru, _____..."

  and with that said, you felt Kiku's lips on yours. They were soft, and quite warm. You savored the kiss; not surprisingly, his lips tasted like pocky.

  ...Well, duh. He was eating pocky.

  As he drew back, you took note of his red face; Wow! It looked as red as Lovino's tomatoes!

  "Hey, Kiku?" you asked softly.


  "I love you too."

  Before he could react, you pressed your lips on his for another kiss. Not that he was complaining, of course.
My first fanfic / reader insert. :D
I hope you like it!

I do not own Hetalia.
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ShakiraIcySilverWolf Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
"...Well, duh. He was eating pocky."
NOOOO, he was TOOO-tally eating sushi.
CraftyViolinist Featured By Owner Edited Jan 24, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Pocky icon more for teh family Pocky Please Pocky Misc Emoji-09 [V1] strawberry in love :pocky: Pocky Emot POOOOCKY and Vocaloid!Megurine Luka (Agrees) [V1] [MMD emoticon] Miku can see you Emoticon: Dance Emoticon: Holy Miku Hatsune Miku-03 (Miku's Gift) 
woodpeltneko Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS IS SO DAMN CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
woodpeltneko Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, pocky. Your favorite Japanese sweet snack food... thing.
sound's like me XD
ham2629 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015  Student Artist
Emoticon: Holy Miku A vocaloid song?!? THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I WOULD DO!!! Hatsune Miku-15 (Happy)
I love this story!
I also love pocky! Pocky Please :pocky: revamp 
HetaliaLove10 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016
Those pocky sticks kinda look like mini dicks...
Sorry i had to...
ShinakuTheLegend Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2016  Student Digital Artist
its okay
i thought of that when i first saw one in my life
HetaliaLove10 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2016
mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
What's with the random 'r's when Japan is talking?
KirbysEpicFan Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2015  Student Writer
that's the Japanese acent for ya!
aimeloverppgz Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Also the L sound like R however R sound like L...Crazy
KirbysEpicFan Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015  Student Writer
i get so confused 

i don't know life anymore...
aimeloverppgz Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
KirbysEpicFan Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Student Writer
Wingweeper Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015
-Finds some and happily nums on them-
I love pocky x3
Nice story brosie! ^ ^
ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015
I-I've never had Pocky...
AsylumNeeded13 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015
How have you lived XD
ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2015
I've tried it since then, friend...

It was amazing.

I tried Strawberry and Chocolate.

AsylumNeeded13 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2015
Yessss!! One of us one of us
ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2015

I also made my friends try it
AsylumNeeded13 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2015
Lol I once attempted to share it with my friends. Needless to say, it didn't turn out very well
ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2015
Divine-Shadow-Queen Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I'v had pocky's before but never tried the game... forever alone... ;u;
xXTheShotaQueenXx Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
A store just for pocky? I was thinking about going to the Pacific Market, of course it being mainly for people from my motherland (Vietnam) I'll just translate it. Otherwise, you did fantastic!
animegeek1235 Featured By Owner May 30, 2015
Ah, pocky. Your favorite Japanese sweet snack food... thing
How did u know I said that when I read the title
Divine-Shadow-Queen Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Their maaaaagic~
kawaiiotakukitten Featured By Owner May 10, 2015
Fangirl Dance 
Xximmortalfox098xX Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Student Artist
AmusiaPrussia: WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the -government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a monday night at 12:00a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other people on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't.

This isn't fake. apparently, if u copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes u will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. u will either get kissed or asked out, if u break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. in 53 mins someone will say i love you or I'm sorry
Example 1: Jenny didn’t believe this and deleted it without even reading. the whole thing! A few days. later on the monday night, she was woken up by loud footsteps. and heavy breathing, there was. Clarissa standing there with a huge knif
aconfusingsilence Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2015
fulletal-souleater2 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Most people aren't sure of what they really want in life. I received this letter

from a friend on the computer, did what it told me to, and within a week,

everything I had wished came true!! Here's an exact copy,




1. To yourself, say the name of the only guy or girl you wanna be with 3


2. Think of something you wanna accomplish within the next week and say

it to your self 6 times!!

3. If you had 1 wish what would it be? say it to yourself 9 times!!!

4. Think of something that you want to happen between you and that

1special person and say it to your self 12 times!!!

5. Now, heres the hard part! Pick only 1 of these wishes and as you scroll

down focus and concentrate on it and think on nothing else but that wish.

* *

* *

* *

Now make one last & final wish about that one wish that you picked.

After reading this, you have 1 hour to send it out to 15 people, and what

you wished for will come true within in one week!

u only get one chance!!!!! Now scroll down and think of your



Did you think of your crush? I hope so, that was your last chance. Now

pay very close attention this important message!

Sorry but once read, must be sent. Yes, this is one of those kinda chain
letters that everyone hates. This one has been going since 1864 and if you
break this chain, you will pay!!!!!! Remember that after hearing these

First Example:

Take Barbra Wallace.. She was a pretty lucky girl, up till she got this same
chain letter. She had a crush on the same kid since kindergarden. when she
got this mail she didn't pay any attention to it. She just thought, no big deal.
And deleted it. The next day her dad got fired and her mom dies in a car
crash. If she would have sent the letter none of that would have happened
and her mom would be alive.

Second Example:

Try Freddie D. Now Freddie D. was your average nerd. Had glasses, was
short and chubby, was in gifted. All the signs of
your total dork. He also received this letter and sent it to 51
people in the hour. Now, like Barbra, he had a crush on a girl since 3rd
grade. The next day after sending the chain the girl confessed her love for
him ever since 3rd grade. Freddie D. finally had the courage to ask her out,
and of course, she had been waiting to yes to that for years. They grew up
and married each other to live happily forever.

Now, you heard the stories. I know which person i'd rather
be, but thats up to you. I wouldn't wanna end up like Barbra but thats only

me. We all want what we cant have but now's ur chance to go out withthat

special somebody ur waiting for. Take it or leave it. If you send this to-

1 person- you will lose all luck in ur love life..... forever!!!!!

10 people- your crush will say they like you as a friend...... ONLY!!!!!

15 people- your crush will say they like you

20 people- your crush will ask you out!

25 people- your crush will kiss you!!

30 people - Your crush will have sex with you

35 people or more- All of the above!!

Don't blow it, it's ur chance to shine! Have everything u wanted, and more!

Now, complaining cus u dont have any
friends. Well theres an answer 4 everything. It's simple, just go in a chat

room, pick some names and send away! but here's the catch..... you only

have 1 hour
if the pain goes on im not gonna make it...!
Bellagt Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Student General Artist
My eyes just :iconexplodeplz: from reading that much words XD

My eyes could barley keep up (not offending you though)
Thudekexiy Featured By Owner May 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What are you doing here


Nicky why
fulletal-souleater2 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Student Digital Artist
its fine my friend dared me to post all those messages or she would do bad things...
Randomsinger11 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  Student General Artist
No fluff, right?
Mad-Alice-07 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good advice Italy, Good advice 
XxEmeraldMayxX Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
SO Cute!!
chinafangirl123 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Student General Artist
  "Vee~ Japan, if you want to kiss her, just play that pocky game!"
Me:haza I see now why kiku-kun wanted the reader to have some snacks with him not a bad idea kawaii fanfic by the way👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
ShadowTheKitsune Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Aww~ Adorable
PoisonAzalea Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Student Writer

Tomoyo Blushing Icon 
konatacake Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Student Filmographer
OOOOH MY GOSHEXO : Kyungsoo Fangirling Kudryavka Noumi (Fangirling) [V3]  konata-sama approvesLuhan : MAMA Mirei Fangirling Icon 
theotakugurl Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Student General Artist
AAAHHH! Pocky attack! :D Cute Fan Fic writer-chan!
elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
hetaliafangirl01 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
love it one of my fav
kawaiibunny4 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
There's a store dedicated to pocky? Awesome I will buy out the whole store !
NerdyParadox Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
My thoughts exactly.
DJDiamond Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That is so cute!
prussiafangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
the feels 
koko-is-sonics-gurl Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I am inner squealing so hard right now! :iconhappyjapanplz: thank you so much for writing this! :iconfangirlingplz:
FeliciaVargas16 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OMG *dies of cuteness overload being over 9,000* <3))
CreepyAnimeFreak02 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD AT FANFICTIONS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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