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  Your cellphone vibrated in your pocket, and judging from the ringtone it was Japan calling. For every country you gave them their own ringtone; and since Japan, was, well, an otaku, to put it blunt, you had given him a Vocaloid song for his ringtone.

  Digging around your pocket for the small device, you flipped it open and held it to your ear. "Hello? Kiku?"

  "Ah, _____. This is Kiku speaking," Kiku answered politely. "I was wondering if you'd rike to get some snacks with me? Itary-san and Germany-san are out training."

  "Shouldn't you be training with them too?" you asked curiously.

  "No. Germany-san gave me a break," Kiku explained. "So, wirl you come with me?"

  "Yeah, sure." you felt your face heat up a bit. "Um, where do you wanna meet?"

  "There is a pocky store near your house; you know where that is, right?" Kiku asked. "I wirl meet you there in a few minutes, okay?"

  "Okay. See you there," you said.

  "Okay. Bye." the phone clicked, and you felt a blush stain your cheeks.

  You were going to spend time with Kiku, alone! A small squeal escaped your lips, and you let out a dreamy sigh. You've been crushing on the Japanese man since you first met him; he was always calm and collected, but funny at the same time. You remembered the time when you caught him reading erotic content...


  "Hey, Kiku!" you called. "Where'd you go?"

  As you padded down the hallways, a noise was suddenly heard.

  The rustling of pages turning caught your attention, and in your curiosity you slunk towards the sound. Poking your head through the door, you grinned as you saw your Asian best friend and crush reading a book. You weren't able to see the cover; he was facing away from you.

  Slowly and quietly, you tip-toed up behind the Japanese man. Usually, Kiku would've noticed you by now, but he was so enraptured in this book that he didn't.

  Finally, you were close enough to read over his shoulder. The only problem? You couldn't read Japanese, so instead you settled for the pictures.

  What you saw first made you gag, then choke, and finally burst into a hysterical fit of laughter as the startled Kiku stared at you in shock.

  "O-Oh my god!" you managed to get out. "Kiku! Why th-the heck... are you reading what I assume to be M-rated stuff?!"

  Kiku blushed profusely, clearing his throat in embarrassment. "_____... I, uhm, did not see you there..."

  Strangely, this just caused you to laugh harder. Oh, you were so
not gonna let Kiku live this down.

Flashback end

  You snapped out of your reminiscing, remembering that you had to get ready to meet Kiku. Brushing out your hair, you threw on some simple, everyday clothes before walking to the pocky store Kiku had mentioned.

  Ah, pocky. Your favorite Japanese sweet snack food... thing.

  You spotted Kiku standing outside the door, a pocky box already in his hand with a pocky stick hanging out of his mouth.

  "Ah, _____, you're here. I arlready bought some... do you want to share for the time being?" Kiku asked as he noticed your presence.

  "Yeah, sure," you said with a smile. "Wanna go sit?"

  You got a nod from Kiku, and you gestured towards the table near them.

  "So, Kiku, how has your day been going?" you asked as you nibbled on the pocky stick. Kiku seemed to hesitate before responding.

  "It has been going fine. What about you, _____?" Kiku asked.

  "My day has actually been going pretty good. Thanks for asking," you grinned. My day's been going good because of you...


  There was an awkward silence for a while, you contemplating on what to say and Kiku thinking about something. Something that involved you, him, and something Italy had told him.

  "Vee~ Japan, if you want to kiss her, just play that pocky game!

  "_____," Kiku said suddenly. His face was a light shade of pink, and you eyed him curiously, a pocky stick hanging from your mouth.

  "What's up?"

  "Crlose your eyes, prlease," Kiku asked softly.

  "O-Oh... uhm, okay..." you mumbled. A blush spilled across your cheeks as you felt some pressure on the other end of your pocky stick, and you nearly snapped open your eyes if it wasn't for Kiku murmuring," Keep them crlosed untirl I say you can open them. Prlease."

  A small crunch sound signified that Kiku had taken a small bite off the other end of the pocky, and he now waited for you to take a bite.

  Slowly, you did. Taking a delicate bite, your face radiated heat as Kiku's face got closer and closer to yours.

  Right before Kiku took the last bite which would end up with his lips on yours, he murmured something so soft, so barely audible that you just barely caught it.

  "Aishiteru, _____..."

  and with that said, you felt Kiku's lips on yours. They were soft, and quite warm. You savored the kiss; not surprisingly, his lips tasted like pocky.

  ...Well, duh. He was eating pocky.

  As he drew back, you took note of his red face; Wow! It looked as red as Lovino's tomatoes!

  "Hey, Kiku?" you asked softly.


  "I love you too."

  Before he could react, you pressed your lips on his for another kiss. Not that he was complaining, of course.
My first fanfic / reader insert. :D
I hope you like it!

I do not own Hetalia.
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Randomsinger11 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New member Student General Artist
No fluff, right?
Mad-Alice-07 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good advice Italy, Good advice 
XxEmeraldMayxX Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
SO Cute!!
chinafangirl123 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  New member Student
  "Vee~ Japan, if you want to kiss her, just play that pocky game!"
Me:haza I see now why kiku-kun wanted the reader to have some snacks with him not a bad idea kawaii fanfic by the way👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
ShadowTheKitsune Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Aww~ Adorable
PoisonAzalea Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  Student Writer

Tomoyo Blushing Icon 
konatacake Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  New member Student Filmographer
OOOOH MY GOSHEXO : Kyungsoo Fangirling Kudryavka Noumi (Fangirling) [V3]  konata-sama approvesLuhan : MAMA Mirei Fangirling Icon 
theotakugurl Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Student General Artist
AAAHHH! Pocky attack! :D Cute Fan Fic writer-chan!
elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
hetaliafangirl01 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love it one of my fav
kawaiibunny4 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
There's a store dedicated to pocky? Awesome I will buy out the whole store !
NerdyParadox Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
My thoughts exactly.
DJDiamond Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That is so cute!
prussiafangirl88 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
the feels 
koko-is-sonics-gurl Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I am inner squealing so hard right now! :iconhappyjapanplz: thank you so much for writing this! :iconfangirlingplz:
FeliciaVargas16 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OMG *dies of cuteness overload being over 9,000* <3))
CreepyAnimeFreak02 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD AT FANFICTIONS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
QueenOfAlpachania Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
What's the pocky game? 
ADreamofAutumn Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's usually played between a boy and a girl. You take a pocky stick and both people start eating it from end to end. You have to eat it carefully so it doesn't break. The idea is for both people to get to the middle without the stick breaking. Thus you end up kissing. Or just touching depending on how you look at it.
QueenOfAlpachania Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
:) okay,thanks!
MissSilverSonicBases Featured By Owner Edited Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
kawaii desu wtf- *explodes*
Also what does Pocky taste like o_o
MillyMaeAKAshap Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Student Writer
It tastes like a type of bread stick thingy (doesn't have much flavor) and dark chocolate :3 But their is multiple flavors including Strawberry so it matters what the flavor is ^_^
MissSilverSonicBases Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SugarKittyPanda Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And that moment when i'm eating pocky..atm..well..
RoseMaylieGottschalk Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
CannibalisticChaos Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
What normal people saw:
 "Yeah, sure," you said with a smile. "Wanna go sit?"

What I saw:
 "Yeah, sure," you said with a smile. "Wanna go sh!t?"
MissSilverSonicBases Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
CannibalisticChaos Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014
Me and my unpleasant thoughts.
Pikaparis Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
I read it the same way XD
CannibalisticChaos Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
I laughed so hard and then I read it again and figured out it was just my mind.
animelovergirl246 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
I-I never had pocky beforeTomoyo Sakagami (Crying) [V3]  i fail at life
crazedpuppy1234 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Pocky is amazing. You don' fail at life, just foods:P also, NAGISSA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
animelovergirl246 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
Thank you
crazedpuppy1234 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoops not nagissa. My bad, :(
cookiehades Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
animelovergirl246 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
ah~ I hope i will get to soon, and thank you for replying cookie-sama
cookiehades Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
I shall pray for you to be able to try it soon at home :)
silvermist64 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry ur not the only one :'(
I haven't had it either
cookiehades Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
Well, then I pray for you too! Seriously if you have a sweet tooth then Pocky is something that is going to change your life.
animelovergirl246 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
T-thank you cookie-sama *smiles and laughs innocently* *and runs up to cookie-sama and hugs*
cookiehades Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Daaawwww come're *hugs tightly*
animelovergirl246 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
a-ha,:innocent: *hugs back*
cookiehades Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
I feel like this hug is never gonna end
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Oblivionkeeper23 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The pocky game!!!Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] Aishiteru!!!!!
Cialois Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
<3!!!!! I love pocky too!!! :D
Mari225 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Are there even such things as Pocky Stores?
(Googled it...and the answer is surprisingly yes)
Theanimeangel Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
I ate pocky before. It was good. Stuck together because Walmart's quality sucks but good.
HuttserandFell Featured By Owner May 6, 2014
DontAskAboutIt Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student General Artist
Now I want pocky...

Why is it so hard to get?!
Xerazu Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
They sell it at some Walmarts Pocky Misc Emoji-09 [V1] 
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