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  "Hey, Ludwig?"

  "Yes, vhat is it, _____?"

  "How do you say 'I love you' in German?" you asked curiously.

  For the most oddest reason a faint blush coated Ludwig's cheeks as he cleared his throat.

  "Vhy ask, _____?" Ludwig questioned. "Are you planning to confess to someone?"

  A noticeable blush spread across your cheeks as you averted your eyes from Ludwig's baby blue ones. "Maybeee…" you said, drawing out the 'e' as you fiddled with your fingers.

  A flicker of jealousy flashed across Ludwig's face, but he hid it as your eyes landed on his once again.

  "So, can you tell me?"

  Ludwig sighed. "Sure, _____."

  You grinned. "Thanks!"

  "Okay," Ludwig started," Try saying 'Ich'."

  "Um… ich…?" you said uncertainly, making it sound like 'itch'.

  "No, no. Make it sound like 'Eek'," Ludwig explained. "Try it."

  "Okay, so it's ich?" you said, this time pronouncing it right. Ludwig nodded, a small smile tugging at his lips.

  "Alright, now say 'liebe'," Ludwig coaxed.

  "Liebe," you said.

  "Pronounce it like 'lee-ba'."

  "Got it, so it's liebe?" you smiled as Ludwig nodded once more.

  "Now say 'dich'." Ludwig instructed.

  "Dich," you said, confident that you pronounced it correctly.

  "It is pronounced 'deek'," Ludwig said with a quiet chuckle while you groaned.

  "You Germans and your funny language," you mumbled. "Alright… dich."

  "Now say it all togezer. Ich liebe dich," Ludwig said.

  "Got it! Ich liebe dich!" you said with a grin.

  Ludwig smiled and crossed his arms. "Now, go and confess zen  _____."

  "But I just did!"

  Ludwig froze in surprise. You… what?

  "Vh-Vhat?!" Ludwig managed to say, a heavy blush now settling on his cheeks.

  "Do you really need me to say it again, Luddy?" you said with a grin. "Ich liebe dich!"

  Silence.

  And then…

  "H-Hey!"

  A strong hand gripped your arm and pulled you into Ludwig's chest, and you blushed a dark shade of red at the sudden contact.

  "Ich liebe dich auch, _____," Ludwig mumbled as he nuzzled into your hair.

  "I'm guessing that means you love me too?" you smiled and wrapped your arms around the German. You could feel Ludwig nod before he tilted up your chin. Expecting him to say something, you were surprised when instead he leaned down to plant a kiss on your lips.

  It was soft and sweet, but a bit rough; just like you expected from him. As you melted into the kiss, a sudden outburst made the two of you jump back in surprise.

  "Kesesese! West finally got _____ to kiss him!"

  A dark blush invaded both of your cheeks, and Ludwig shot an embarrassed glare at his albino brother.

  "So, _____... can I have a kiss too?" Gilbert asked as he walked up to you with a wink.

  "Go screw yourself, Gil," you said with a smirk as you looped your arm around Ludwig's," My kisses are reserved for Luddy here."

  With that said, Ludwig blushed a bright red and hid his face in his hand; but underneath his gloved hand, his lips tugged up into a small smile.

  'Ich liebe dich, _____.'
S. Italy = [link]
Japan = [link]
Russia = [link]
China = [link]
N. Italy = [link]
America = [link]

I think... I just ruined Ludwig's character. :iconotlplz:
It was my first time writing for him. Please excuse my mistakes. ^^;

Oh, and for Ludwig's accent, there might have been a few spots where I didn't add it in, I apologize. :iconlazycryplz:

Oh yeah! and I'm planning to make a series out of this; Which character should I do next? Nevermind, next on my agenda is Japan, Russia, and Italy. :XD:

Hetalia (c) Hidekaz Himaruya
Picture from: [link]
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:iconfantagedawn:
FantageDawn Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Student Writer
Meh
It was good!
Maybe make Germany sound a little more hot :3
Cuz hes that type y'know.
He takes whats his and thats that :D
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mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
(takes out gun)
I BELONG TO LUDDY!!!!
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:iconx-anime-thug-otaku-x:
I'll give Prussia a kiss anyday
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2pItaly-2ptalia Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015
I love this! It is so cute.
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animefan5657 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016
.....uhhhh....Luciano, what are you doing on a Germany x Reader Fanfic...?

XD
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:icon2pitaly-2ptalia:
2pItaly-2ptalia Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Because...
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:icondragonfiredrop:
dragonfiredrop Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
this is so cute
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:iconhikarumokona:
HikaruMokona Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
Heart Love heart attack FREE flying hearts Icon Heart - Free Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-03 (Squee) [V1] Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Heart Dance) [V6] 
I LOVE THIS!!!
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:iconanimegeek1235:
animegeek1235 Featured By Owner May 30, 2015
Eat lama dick... Well then
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:iconmiyucorn:
Miyucorn Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS MADE MY DAY OMFG
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:iconanimegeek1235:
animegeek1235 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2016
I think I found a new insult XD
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:iconmiyucorn:
Miyucorn Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Omfg yes xD
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:iconanimegeek1235:
animegeek1235 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2016
Yeah and if u get in trouble with teachers or something you could say I said I love you in German XD
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:iconmikasamlp531:
mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
ERMAHGERD XD
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:iconemmalinemagentamay:
EmmalineMagentaMay Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Do one for Prussia, da?
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:icongothfoxgirl:
Gothfoxgirl Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
Me: hey Gill want some ice for that BURN?
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:iconthe-unrealistic:
The-UnRealIstic Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nah It's alright I already called the firemen
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Gothfoxgirl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015
Lol XD
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:icontsundereromano100:
TsundereRomano100 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
I was trying to pronounce it too, and I just... "Eat llama d*ck" Holy crap I can't breathe
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Songlover101 Featured By Owner May 16, 2015  Student Artist
PFFFT XD
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:iconmiyucorn:
Miyucorn Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg I'm crying.. ;w;
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:iconimjustpassingthrough:
MY LIFE IS NOW A MILLION PERCENT BETTER. THANKS
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:iconriuette:
Riuette Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMFG XDDD You just made my day
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:iconnoelvermillion987:
NoelVermillion987 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
omfg I'M CRYING Usui-laughing (Takumi Usui) 
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BlackHeart310 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
same for me!!

after I try i was likeHetalia Germany spinning NO NEIN Icon  that sound wrong!!!
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:iconlucijohn:
Lucijohn Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I do german so i know what it means!
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:iconmikasamlp531:
mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm from Germany so I knew EVERYTHING he said. Lol
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Great!
I love German. It's such a nice language
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:iconmikasamlp531:
mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep!
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:iconlucijohn:
Lucijohn Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
My brother's going to Germany soon
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:iconmikasamlp531:
mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool!
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I'm jalous
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:iconmikasamlp531:
mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:tehe3d: Tehe 3D 50x50 derp 
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NAGlTO Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought it was pronounced eesh-liba-deesh 0-0
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SpeedXaaa Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really depends on the dialect. Some pronounce "ch" hard, some soft. I was always taught to pronounce "ch" somewhere there in the middle.
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CrazyTimeTiger Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
Whelp, my life is over. I tried to pronounce Ich liebe dich properly (in my mind) while listening to France's laughter the whole, entire time...
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FeliciaVargas16 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*hugs Ludwig*
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GracieLovesHetalia16 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Prussia:so can I have a kiss to?
me: aw of course you can
Ludwig: v-VHAT?
*i walk up to Gil and slap him across his face*
Prussia:I VAS KIDDING
*i kiss luddy* me: only for luddy
*ludwig blushes* Ich Liebe dich 
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LudwigGermany23 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
NO NO NO! Forget ruining his 'PERFECT' character! I don't care as long as it's good! XD XD XD
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lnfluenze Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Reading this whule listening to All Time Low's "Guts" makes me so emotional. ;w;
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oOSchutzengelOo Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, I'm from Germany and I'm sooooo happy to read something in my language ;__; *cries of happiness*
It's really cute ^-^ Ludwig is just.. the very best xDD Great job! *thumbs-up*
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HE STEALS HOW I LAUGH!!!!! I was cracking up in class at a joke someone made during Apples to Apples, and this girl and I were cracking up with our hands over our mouths. Then, the clown of our group randomly asked, "Why do girls laugh like that?" Which made us laugh even harder!
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AmarindaCrosstin Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014
I laugh, "Kesesesesese". I plan to brainwash my friends to "fusosososo" and "Ohonononon", WE SHALL BE THE BTT
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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Jesskat1228 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I was saying Ich liebe dich wrong (in mah head) the whole time...:icondeathstareplz: Thanks for teaching me though!
:iconadorableplz:
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helenadoodle Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
loved, it!
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iSleepingBear Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
too cute xD almost died of a nosebleed, i blame japan for no reason! 
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hiitsgermany Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
IM CRYING AIYAHHH IT'S SO GOOD ICH LIEBE DICH, STORYYYY!
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Obsessedchick Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Noooooo you didn't I loved it so much that's how I think he would react :D
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